Task Force One Dani's Got a Gun Doc Åá Reflectionslisburnltd

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Task Force One Dani's Got a Gun Doc Å á Reflectionslisburnltd ↠ Daniella Dani Lynch is a homicide investigator in New York City She's worked hard to achieve her gold shield She's tough and has a love for guns and proving she's just as good at her job as any man out thereShe's on the hunt for a brutal seriDaniella Dani Lynch is a homicide investigator in New York City She's worked hard to achieve her gold shield She's tough and has a love for guns and proving she's just as good at her job as any man out thereShe's on the hunt for a brutal serial killer This individual leaves so much blood and gore at the crim I should probably preface this review by saying that I really enjoy this author’s work but I get so damn frustrated with her This book is a perfect example of why interesting ideas none fleshed out; seemingly strong and independent heroine turns into completely submissive chicken nugget the second one of her mates tells her what to do It’s incredibly frustrating That having been said I really do think that if the author had weeded out some of the unnecessary plot devices – like Jack the supposed booty call who’s presence doesn’t seem to have much point other than establishing that Dani’s not a virgin – and played up the plot points that were left behind – like Dani’s healing ability and the serial killer case – this could have easily been a really fantastic ménage erotica Unfortunately the author seemed to get tangled in a web of her own ideas I mean really she should have thrown out at least three of the storylines and this still would have been great Better even because it would have given the entire story focus and given us readers time to enjoy the fact that Dani has a group of very alpha men all clamoring for her affectionsThis brings me to the men they were all fairly interchangeable and treated Dani like a possession rather than their mate That might work for some people but I just do NOT believe that someone who’s supposed to be as strong and independent as Dani would have put up with it The worst of the offenders was in my opinion the vampire of the group since he tended to just mind whammy usually as a prelude to sex Dani whenever she was showing any of her former independence – or you know just because apparently Didn’t sit well with me at allAnyhow though like I said before I do enjoy this author’s work and her storytelling skills have definitely improved since the first of series I just wish she’d keep her strong female characterswell strong